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Post by shearx on Jun 7, 2006 0:24:53 GMT -5
i haven't got a girfriend...  |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 7, 2006 2:06:28 GMT -5
I had the chance but she was a bit too insane for me.
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Post by O-G on Jun 7, 2006 9:42:35 GMT -5
lol...i think i started something here
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Post by Purist on Jun 7, 2006 9:58:22 GMT -5
I have one and she's consumed my life...more than AC:FF and MHF combined!!!
Man I sound like a jerk.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 7, 2006 16:12:54 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is on the Way. I also done this in Paint (Because I suck at drawing) Its a layout of the HOG so you guys know where everything is. Since I can't explain anything without a reference.(the details just float around my mind otherwise) House of GenerationsThe Orange Lines are where the Lifts for people can generally go. They can go from side to side, not just up and down. They aren't Exactly correct since Section H has multiple levels and the can also bring you to the bottom floor of A and B. There are 8 Lifts that work in the system. The blue Circles are were Walls were collapsed in when the place was found. They are now fixed. The red circles are control rooms. the one with the second ring on the inside is the Main control room. Rooms A,B,C,D,E, and F were original rooms. The others (including the smaller elevator) were added on when the place was remodeled. A. The AC hanger. ACs are in 5 rows of 5 sprouting from the side walls (25 on each side of the room) keeping the runway from room B to room C clear. Behind and above each AC are storage units where secondary parts are kept. The A3RS can interchange these parts with minor help from the ground crew(Also the Repair Crew). The retired ones are in the back closer to room D. The current ones are kept closer to Room C. You can have about 3 ACs stand on each other to reach the ceiling. B. After taking out Section I (Explained Later) the entire back half of the room holds the MTs. Currently holding about 20 with enough for another 10-15 depending on the size of the thing. MTs don't need as much room as ACs. Mostly because they don't have Storage units for spare parts and can be parked right next to each other. Some of these are captured defense units from other facilities that were made during/before the Great Destruction, those Box like things with the treads on the bottom. We thought we should have some because of the nature of the HOG. One is actually from this facility. It was found under one of the collapsed walls(Circled in blue). It probably went unnoticed by the people who cleared the place out of everything. The Corner you see when looking to your right as you come from room A is the repair bay. It can hold 4 ACs(or MTs) for repair at one time. We only have enough Repair crews to fix 2 at a time. And that is spreading the personal limit. Hight is the same as room A. C. Ready room before going onto the elevator. This is where the Entry Plank is. The plank extends from the sides of the room and retracts after the Pilots enter their ACs. You can have about 2 ACs on top of each other. D. Just a Room connecting A and B. Hight is the same as C. E. The Elevators. F. Couldn't put it in. It's the room that the elevators stop at and has the doors to the Outside. Its twice the size of the the main elevator(Width and length), with said elevator in the center. This is where the Defense AC Cores are. Their is also a watch station here. The lift is used to get to it. You can have about 2 ACs on top of each other. G. The parking garage for cars and trucks. We are about 250mi away from the closest city. But it only takes about an hour and a half or so to get there since cars are faster and safer(Oxymoron?). You can travel at 150mi easily on open roads. Not aloud near civilian areas obviously. H. Not seen but this section has 4 floors. Within these are the living courters, training/exercise areas, cafeteria, Arboretum(Indoor Garden area), and Rec rooms(The most used one is a Bar like area that has pool tables, dartboards, other table top games, and of coarse a bar). Don't ask for the layout of these floors. I'm not doing it. I. Built into Room B by enclosing walls. It is separated into 3 sections. First is the Generator room. Second has the Temperature/Life-support system, Third is the Water Procession room. |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 7, 2006 19:53:34 GMT -5
Renamed the Story and thread since its no longer the story I was going to write.
Would you belive this is my first Fanfic?
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Post by O-G on Jun 7, 2006 21:42:57 GMT -5
yes. lol j/k its pretty good, i like the dry humor you put into it too  |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 7, 2006 21:56:56 GMT -5
Heh Thanks, but this IS my first Fanfic.
I started writing a story a LONG time ago. Couldn't finish it becuase I had the Ideas (Still do) but they couldn't stay long enough in one place to be put in writing.
That story is were the title 'Atrum Custodis' came from if you would beleive it. (Atrum Custodis wasn't the name of the story. It was the code name for one of the characters.)
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Post by Tailsnake on Jun 7, 2006 21:59:10 GMT -5
I never finish my stories, I can't write with going into discriptive depth - yet I hate staying still and putting my ideas into tangable form. I always have the entire story line planned out though...
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 8, 2006 5:04:54 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is up. Please read and review.
Tailsnake, I'm going to need that AC design for your character very soon.
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Post by O-G on Jun 8, 2006 13:01:03 GMT -5
do you need the female from me soon?
my gf and i are having trouble getting together right now x.x
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 8, 2006 17:38:50 GMT -5
No, but I do at least need the characters AND ACs from anyone who hasn't sent one yet.
I only have 3 characters besides my own . . . and one is still missing an AC.
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Post by O-G on Jun 8, 2006 23:28:07 GMT -5
lol here's the female character(i couldnt get my gf to do it, this is from her best friend ) Name: Maria Height: 5'7'' Weight:110 lbs Hair:Long/Brown Eyes:Brown Age:21 Build:Semi-Bulky(Think basketball player...female that is) Personality:Sarcastic,jokes a lot,totally unorganized,Heavy sleeper,huge partyer,nice,clumsy,jumpy,semi-insane And she pilot's my AC Juliet |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 9, 2006 0:18:07 GMT -5
heh thats going to be interesting, Do you have a V2 of Juliet or something or do you want me to use the one in you hanger.
I still need tailsnake's AC for ADRIAN. Come on dude! If you can't think of one tell me to use one of your league ACs. Your character can always 'decide' to change it later!
Remember!! You could have your character nearly do anything!!! Just send it in PM!!!!
And I'm still waiting for characters from at least DarkNess and Jacques. You two are not getting away from this.
For anyone else. Limit is 3 Characters per person. 1 Raven, 1 Repair Crew member, And 1 Female. The female could be either a Raven or Repair crew member.
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Post by O-G on Jun 9, 2006 10:00:25 GMT -5
right now shes going to use the V2, which is the one in my hangar, i may PM you her V3 at some point in time later in the story but for now shes fine
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 11, 2006 12:46:11 GMT -5
Chapter 4 is on the way.
At this point I am going to have to ask for at least 3 Ideas from everyone in order to continue after each chapter.
I also would like those charaters too.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 12, 2006 1:53:48 GMT -5
Chapter 4 Is up.
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Post by shearx on Jun 12, 2006 3:03:45 GMT -5
not very long, that chapter...
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 12, 2006 3:32:58 GMT -5
Sorry forgot to say that. I was thinking like this would be chapter 4 Part 1 but now that I think about it is not a good idea.
Since no one else has read it I'll take it down and wait untill its fished.
lol what a great time I'm doing with my first fanfic.
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Post by O-G on Jun 12, 2006 6:52:08 GMT -5
you're "doing" a great time? could i meet this "great time"...? anyway...get crackin'! lol *pulls out a whip along with girlfriend...claws outstretched* or else...  |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 13, 2006 3:37:24 GMT -5
Just for that I'm going to make Barda have a bullet hole in its head.
Now be quiet and don't bug me.
O-G Says:yeah okay...i changed the name back from Atrum...w/e lol
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 13, 2006 7:50:03 GMT -5
The proper Chapter 4 is now up.
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Post by shearx on Jun 13, 2006 15:52:27 GMT -5
I added the pic of Wandere i.e. Vincent so that people can get a better idea of what it looks like.
hope you don't mind
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 13, 2006 23:01:20 GMT -5
I guess its ok but it's kinda unfair since I can't do that for anyone elses ACs.
Do you think you could make pics for the others and for when anyone enters a new AC?
So far there is only the ones for John, Spike, and O-G's second character waiting to get in.
and O-G.
What did you do to my name?!
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Post by O-G on Jun 14, 2006 14:12:23 GMT -5
i just edited a post of urs for fon that said ud put a bullet into Barda's head...and i erased barda and out in Atrum
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