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Post by Shark on Jun 2, 2006 6:48:33 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm pretty sure we'll see a whole lot of guest ACs before this is over. Ominis and Ominia should be two of them (What would a fanfic be without Atrum's ACs?).
Widower's child was Orphan.... you knew that right? I'll leave it to your imagination how they gave birth to him *cough*.
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Post by O-G on Jun 2, 2006 8:58:36 GMT -5
EDIT: Juliet will probably be in there sometime, just not in this arc. She'll probably get into the story later on; and I assure you that she won't die immediately (if at all) like Barda and Zeratul. WAIT...i small seed has just been planted in my mind(a big bubble pops up above O-G's head...you see Orphan+Juliet in the bubble lol) I don't think so...but it may happen...hrmm... |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 2, 2006 14:54:52 GMT -5
I knew it was Orphan. I was just focusing on the improbability of the ACs having kids . . .
How does that work?
*Starts thinking of the Robot and washer machine from Robot Chicken*
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Post by shearx on Jun 2, 2006 18:13:17 GMT -5
Lol, it's supposed to be a bit absurd like that. ACs do not have emotions, nor children, but that's just how it cam about.
BTW, dark. Sandra (widower's wife) needs to make an appearance. I was thinking that a shell with a maverick AI is being utilized to fool orphan. He needs a weak spot (and has many).
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 2, 2006 19:05:00 GMT -5
I got the Updates done with Ominis and Ominia.
The problem is that I don't Have Nearly enough Credits for the Updates. (Ominia needs 31k, This includes a stage change)
I will Be posting the Shells(Visible Parts and Paint Only. No parts like the Gen or Inside. And no Tuning or AI) in My Designer Hanger until I do have enough.
Just who is actually writing the fic right now? I'll have to send you the Full Designs so you can see how they work for an appropriate inclusion into the story. (lol I now have too much pride in my Designs and don't want any misrepresentation lol)
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Post by Shark on Jun 2, 2006 19:22:07 GMT -5
I'm writing the fic right now but shear and I may collab in the future.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 3, 2006 6:09:11 GMT -5
Its offical. ACs can properly Reproduce.
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Post by O-G on Jun 3, 2006 10:30:03 GMT -5
lol Barda's a powerhouse it looks like...but we have yet to see Juliet's battle prowess...and with Rex talking highly of her and her being brand new...and you said she won't die quickly...it looks like she's going to be very harsh with Cobra lol
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Post by shearx on Jun 3, 2006 11:47:57 GMT -5
Barda and zeratul seem more powerful bercause their opponents, Despair, Serpent, and Cobra are not ganging up and fighting them all at once. Instead they are pairing off and fighting that way.
Juliet will be sure to give Cobra one hell of a match, as well.
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Post by O-G on Jun 3, 2006 13:08:06 GMT -5
Well i just meant he was a beast cuz he threw serpent across the courtyard lol
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Post by Shark on Jun 3, 2006 15:46:59 GMT -5
lol Barda's a powerhouse it looks like...but we have yet to see Juliet's battle prowess...and with Rex talking highly of her and her being brand new...and you said she won't die quickly...it looks like she's going to be very harsh with Cobra lol Well actually it was I that said she wouldn't die quickly, not shear (who did this part). I wasn't expecting Juliet to be in this early either, but shear has implemented her very well so I guess we can assume she is socially related to Rex, if you get what I mean. Next part is being written by I, you probably can expect it today. |
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Post by O-G on Jun 3, 2006 22:39:36 GMT -5
hmm....Juliet is pretty bully-ish with her picking at Cobra lol
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 3, 2006 23:45:01 GMT -5
I voting for Cobra and Serpent to win.
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Post by O-G on Jun 4, 2006 0:00:26 GMT -5
EY! i resent that...lol
i wanna c orphan and juliet get something going hahaha...that'd be interesting, Juliet's a beast in comparison to Orphan in terms of size heh.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 0:08:08 GMT -5
Just becuase they will win doesn't mean she will die. She can get her ass handed to her and they leave her crippled or something. It will just take awhile for her to get back into the story. (Revenge anyone?)
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Post by O-G on Jun 4, 2006 7:48:25 GMT -5
...the problem is that Cobra has been burnt to a crisp by Zeratul and been hammered by Juliet's Harpies, while Serpent has a huge hole in his core due to barda, so his mobility is pretty handicapped...
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Post by Shark on Jun 13, 2006 21:07:48 GMT -5
*clap clap*
Good job with the latest part, shear. It was emotional, but it's nice that they're keeping in contact with the brothers.
It's gonna be good with Drifter joining. Now Orphan has started a party of sorts with Drifter as the bladesman (kinda like RPGs, lol).
BTW Maybe Orphan needs to get another weapon somehow... his other bazooka was demolished by Wanderer so he's been fighting with only the one held by his father for a while. I'm not sure if the handgun counts.
We also need to decide on the rebels and such.
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Post by shearx on Jun 13, 2006 21:41:28 GMT -5
did you really think it was good?
lol
but yeah, we gotta figure some stuff out. And should we follow Serpent and Cobra as they search for the other AC?
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Post by Shark on Jun 13, 2006 21:55:41 GMT -5
Yeah, you captured their characters appropriately and the plot development was interesting.
Maybe we can follow the adventures of Serpent and Cobra seperately... or just general bits and pieces of what they're doing, lol.
I already have some ideas mapped out for this arc; we can talk about it sometime on MSN.
PS. Who's doin the next part?
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 13, 2006 23:42:38 GMT -5
Orphan had pulled Wanderer’s blade from his hangar. He threw it at Drifter, who caught it and looked at it despairingly. A tear rolled down his cheek. What happens when he's out of window washer fluid? lol j/k This is turning out GREAT! Please continue! |
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Post by O-G on Jun 14, 2006 0:00:20 GMT -5
very well done shear...i liked it quite well  and obviously you guys probably both know whats going through my head right now as to who's missing out on the action but i waont annoy you all about it anymore...ill just watch the story unfold and maybe design an AC specificly for this Fic or something of that nature if you want me to later |
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Post by Shark on Jun 14, 2006 6:20:46 GMT -5
Stop worrying, we haven't forgotten about that AC (at least I haven't).
She'll probably return sometime in the future; I can't guarantee it'll be in this arc though.
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Post by O-G on Jun 14, 2006 14:11:02 GMT -5
im not sure as to what the term "arc" represents...
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 14, 2006 14:26:16 GMT -5
I think it means the direction the characters are going at the moment.
Like when Orphan was being trained and attack by mysterious ACs in the beginning is an Arc.
Another would be when the story started to do the ordeal in the castle.
The next Arc should be what they are going to do now after Orphan and Drifter join together.
fer mi riting skilz.
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Post by Shark on Jun 14, 2006 15:06:28 GMT -5
The way I see it is that an arc is a distinct part of the entire journey/quest, it is often when the main character and companions journey to a new location but not always.
For example, the events in Aros Highland, Rus Field, and Wavis Canyon could be considered one arc because they were part of Orphan's character building and training (and were considerably shorter). The Fros Region part is definitely one arc because it had more time spent on it.
Next arc will concern Dewlite City/Firefly/Rebels.
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