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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 10:44:10 GMT -5
Ok what I didn't put in so far is that only his parents are alive right now and are living elsewhere. They aren't Ravens anymore so they live in a city with somewhat normal jobs.
And Review!
Another thing
All New Characters their ACs and Ideas to include for the next chapter must be PMed to me so know one else knows whats going to happen.
Remember, This is all for fun so almost anything goes!
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Post by O-G on Jun 4, 2006 10:51:55 GMT -5
heh...i guess Spike is going to pop up pretty quickly since he's the only guy anyone from the forum has put up for being in the story  works for me lol, but you better not make him a bad guy...make him like...John's brother or sumthing like that o.o |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 10:58:55 GMT -5
Everyone that makes a character will become a "Freind of the Family". And live in the HOG. (House of Generations)
All enemys will be ACs from the other AC games. And all missions shall be from the other AC games as well.
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Post by O-G on Jun 4, 2006 11:11:14 GMT -5
gotcha, deleted the other thread for u as you asked btw
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 11:43:38 GMT -5
Gah I forgot to move the info here.
The first chapter is more of a background about where the fic takes place. It has a bit more comedy and history of John's Family then I may have wanted because I was going for a different type of fic before.
I am requesting everyone to make characters for this story. And give Ideas on what you would like to see next. Of course the Ideas may be modded to fit everything together by the end of the chapter.
Your character needs a Name and/or Title. Like John will be known as Atrum when on a Mission or in the Arena.
Your character needs an AC and will be piloting it. I need to know your Part design and Paint. I also need to know how your Pilot will use AC. You could also send an AI so I can get the feel for it and/or you could tell me if you do something special that can't be done with the AI.
Also post your background and any quirks your character has. Like O-G's character Spike will always have his dog in the Cockpit with him.
The basis of this fic is how you as a Raven spends their time on Missions, Arena Fights, and on your free time. Everyone will be switching from one to another from chapter to chapter.
I'll say this again. After every chapter I would like you to say what you would like to happen next and/or what you would like your character to do. PM this to me so no one else will know and I'll try to get it all together.
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Post by Shark on Jun 4, 2006 14:45:30 GMT -5
...Interesting way to do it....
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 14:53:14 GMT -5
Should I redo the first chapter to include less of the cheesy jokes?
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Post by Tailsnake on Jun 4, 2006 15:41:44 GMT -5
Well if john has his own fic I can't use him in mine.
Anyway my character:
Name - Adrian Coleson
Age - 8
Sex - Male
Hair - Brown (dyed Black)
Eyes - Gray
Skin - very light (think goth/emo)
Biography - Trained to be a soldier from youth because of his father's unbelievable battle record. Both his older brother's cracked under the pressure and are now in governement custody - They showed immense promise. Both parents died in an assasination a few years ago. Because his brothers cracked under the pressure he has been given a huge amount of freedom in his training. He has a lot of raw skill and likes to drink (nobody bother's to stop him). He can be a real jerk because he has been raised in an environment where he has a lot of power.
Well that's it.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 16:07:08 GMT -5
Do'h
heh, Ok. Though the only thing the same was the Name. I'm useing a AC close to the one I used for the Missions in Nexus.
But remember. I NEED EVERYONE TO PUT YOUR CHARACTERS AND IDEAS IN PM. This way no one can see what will happen next. lol
I have a slightly deferent verson of Chapter 1. It has less jokes and Explanes how they can aford to live there when having 2 or more ACs per Mission.
I'll put it up Under the other one. You guys can tell me which one you like better.
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Post by Tailsnake on Jun 4, 2006 17:55:13 GMT -5
Do I still need to PM mine then?
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 4, 2006 18:13:19 GMT -5
No just delete it. I copyied it to another document.
I need At least One more character to start the next chapter.
Remeber PM.
I'm going to keep the new version up. I'll put the Old version under my Designer Hanger so you can still see it if you want.
O-G You can delete the posts when ever you can now.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 5, 2006 11:04:46 GMT -5
ACs can also have different setup for Missions and Arena Fights.
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Post by shearx on Jun 5, 2006 20:07:48 GMT -5
just sent in my character...
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 5, 2006 20:14:37 GMT -5
We now need one from DarkNess lol.
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 3:13:26 GMT -5
New chapter is up.
'Chicken Scratch' is what they call the mission request they send to each other so then can have 2 ACs durring 1 mission.
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Post by O-G on Jun 6, 2006 7:46:37 GMT -5
lol...Spike and Francis just LOVE eachother...I can tell.
Is that Shear's guy or Dark's or who's?
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 11:30:56 GMT -5
Its Shear's.
The Fanfic is called Boredom since I was going to do a more comedy based fanfic of what does everyone do when stuck at the hanger waiting for the next mission while their minds were slowly desending to insanity from boredom. heh I have no Idea what to call it now so its keeping the name.
Do to not being that great at writing I have a hard time incorporating the details on how the character looks without changing the current flow of the story. I will be placing them here if I don't get the chance to put them in when a new character enters.
John Doghw. (Pronounced as 'John Doe'. Not his real last name of coarse. But changed to keep who he is the son/grandson of secret when in public. Certain people have come to resent the Family he comes from.)
Tact Name: Atrum
Age: 24
Sex - Male
Hair - Brown, Close to Black
Eyes - Blue mixed into a ring of Brown around the Iris, giving it the look of Grey. Do to this his eyes have the Added effect of Matching nearby colors. (Like if he was in front of Green wall paper his eyes will look green)
Skin - Caucasian
Build - Average
Spike
Tact Name: Spike (Some AC pilots use their real names for Tact names when they register to be Ravens. Although it is unsure if Spike is his real name are not. With his Personality I figured that when asked about it he probably would have said "eh, Spike is good enough")
Age- Unknown
Sex - Male
Hair - Red
Eyes - Blue
Skin - Caucasian
Build - Slightly more muscular then average.
Francis Shephard
Tact Name: Bird
Age - 23
Sex - Male
Hair - Brown
Eyes - Green
Skin - Caucasian
Build - Average
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 14:21:47 GMT -5
I just saw the Fader. Thanks O-G!
I haven't received characters from DarkNess, Moon Walker, Rainmaker, Nina-Cobalt, and Silence.
If anyone wants to can also make a Female character. It can't be all guys. At least one has to be different.
And O-G. It can't be called Faye, Jullia, or Edward.
Though Ed would be an interesting one in a world were technology rules. I wander what she would do to Tailsnake's character lol. (I DON'T plan on having her enter. It's just a joke.)
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Post by O-G on Jun 6, 2006 14:26:49 GMT -5
lol...i wasnt planning on entering another Bepop char, Spike just reminds me of myself is all Hmm female chars..... hah, maybe ill have my Girlfriend design one for you  And if i do end up entering a female char she'll use Juliet as her AC |
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 14:52:52 GMT -5
Makes sense, go for it.
And people, when giving Ideas of what you want to have your character do remember it could be ANYTHING. Well anything that wouldn't be censured of course.
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Post by Tailsnake on Jun 6, 2006 18:42:53 GMT -5
cool, can I make a girl?
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 20:51:26 GMT -5
Sure.
I think I also need some characters for the Repair crew.
So I guess everyone is allowed to make 1 Raven and 1 Repair Crew Member.
I'm only going to allow 2 Female characters in total from everyone.
Unless you are going to have them get together with your Raven or Repair crew member. But either way you can't make more then 1 Female. So only three characters a person.\
Tailsnake, I think I sent you 2 PMs asking to make an AC for your character. So if you haven't seen them(Or just didn't care lol) I need that before your character can come in.
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Post by Tailsnake on Jun 6, 2006 20:53:22 GMT -5
Well I made an 8 year-old drunk boy, I wonder what type of girl I should make
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Post by AtrumCustodis on Jun 6, 2006 23:16:20 GMT -5
o.0 ?
I wonder on how offten I talk to myself.
lol j/k
EDIT: Oh yea I also didn't get any characters from Jacques either lol.
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Post by O-G on Jun 7, 2006 0:00:25 GMT -5
I'll reserve myself a spot to make a female character, she'll be up when i next see my girlfriend lol
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